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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

#education #luxury #right #wealth
Knowledge is necessary and priceless for an individual. It should not be considered as an extravagance, but a basic need for humans and must be free of cost
for
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to
 everyone. In my opinion, I completely agree as without
education
, the nation cannot grow for a longer time.
Firstly
, poverty levels are high in uneducated world,
thus
 impacting the economy of country adversely. Lack of knowledge prevent the individual from job sector and persuade him to do unskilled work,
therefore
 the country cannot have skilled people
such
 as scientists, doctors and businessmen, to ensure the smooth operation of different sectors.
Hence
, the government needs to pursue skilled people from other nations to fulfil the needs of society. In overall the economy of the nation is affected.
For instance
, Nigeria is one of the poorest countries and its literacy rate is only 9 percent. Another vital factor is the independence and boosting the confidence via
education
. An educated youth can work in any part of the world with their knowledge and skilled levels.
In addition
 to that, educated people are more aware of the human rights as compare with illiterate youth. In
recent study
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a recent study
recent studies
the recent study
 conducted by
education department
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the education department
 in India, has shown that 99 percent of educated youth
are earning
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is earning
 enough to feed the family of 4 individuals. In conclusion, the
education
 is a basic right
for
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of
 the people to become competent and skilled in
this
 world to feed their family as well as to boost the economy of
nation
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the nation
a nation
nations
.
Hence
, I believe that
education
 should be free of any charge for every individual.
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  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
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