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some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school Do you agree or disagree?

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Now a days
Suggestion
Nowadays
, children are not aware of
money
 management. I agree with of point of providing lessons at
school
to
Suggestion
with
 the children regarding
money
 management. Children will spend most of their time in
school
 rather than at home. As most of the parents are job holders, they are giving handsome of
money
 to their children for their pocket
money
. Because of
this
, children are not aware of
money
Suggestion
monetary
 value and tend to spend them on lavish things. Some of them are spending on drugs,
smoking which
Accept comma addition
smoking, which
 is
spoling
a winder around which thread or tape or film or other flexible materials can be wound
spooling
spoiling
 their childhood. When they run out
money
, after spending their pocket
money
, they are in search of
money
 for their habits.
This
 drives them to illegal activities and
thus
 increasing the crime rate. Recent study states that most of the crimes that are done by
minor
Suggestion
minors
a minor
 are due to bad
habbits
an established custom
habits
. When we teach them, how to manage the
money
 at
school
,
then
 the changes of them getting
spolied
having the character or disposition harmed by pampering or oversolicitous attention
spoiled
split
solid
 can be reduced. Not only the crime rate but they can
also
 save them for their better future. They can use it for better education or for carrier start up like
bussiness investment
Suggestion
a business investment
business investment
. In conclusion, I support the point of having lessons at
school
, for children regarding the
money
 management.
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