Some people think that In order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Efficient transportation

system

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is difficult to manage in

majority

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the majority

of the nations. Many individuals believe that boosting residence in

city

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areas

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of rural regions can solve the difficulties of

traffic

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and conveyance

system

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. I am of the opinion, that gathering all the people to urban regions will make the problem more complex,

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I completely disagree with the idea to bring people in cities

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,

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the cities have

better transportation

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a better transportation system

system

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as

compare

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compared

with rural transport, but allotting all the people to one place will make the

city

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more crowded and difficult to move. Merging of

city

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and rural people will make it difficult to move the

traffic

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as with the addition of individuals, the

number

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of vehicles will be

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increase

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increased

especially in terms of personal conveyance.

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, making more

traffic

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jams mainly during office hours.

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, the admission of villagers in

Delhi metro

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the Delhi metro system

system

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has made the commuter over-crowded and congested.

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, poor quality life, accommodating all the people together greater the risk of accidents. Chaos to manage

such

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complex

traffic

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management results the potential

to

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for

higher accidental risk, to overcome

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impacts government needs to

increase

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number

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the number

of routes for daily commuting and

increase

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the

traffic

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controls by implanting more signals,

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resulting more complex

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resulting in more complex

structures and chance of failures.

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, metro cities

has often recorded

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have often recorded

with higher

number

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of

incidence

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incidences

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However, with

the addition of people from

village

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villages

the village

will simply make the situation worsen. In conclusion, merging of

city

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and rural people will make it over crowded

city

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highways and the problems of

traffic

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will enhance because of

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increase

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the increase

an increase

in

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number

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the number

of vehicles on

road

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the road

.

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hampering the

traffic

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control

system

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Therefore I

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Therefore, I

believe we should try to develop village sectors

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of coupling villagers with urban citizens.