In many developed countries, fast food is cheap and widely available. Many people tend to choose unhealthy option. what can governments do to solve this problem.

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It is believed that the majority of the people nowadays prefer to eat unhealthy

food

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essay, will be

analyzed

examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts

analysed

and

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suggestions will be discussed. One of the significant factors is the low cost of the junk

food

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. Most of the fast

food

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restaurants minimize the price of junk

food

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this

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is a smart idea to attract customers to buy more

food

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, while I was

studied

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studying

United States

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the United States

of America, there were vast advertising and discount that junk

food

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restaurants created.

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student

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the student

a student

was chasing the promotion to manage their limited budgets. Another major factor is the high number of the fast

food

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restaurants in one single city.

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, in

flagstaff

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Flagstaff

in Arizona

state there

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state, there

are several fast foods

compare

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compared

comparable

to its area and population.

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, companies offer many branches on campus because they want to expand and cover all the buildings. It is true

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the responsibility of the government to follow these companies.

refers to the speaker or writer

suggest is that the government should increase the taxes for the fast

food

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, the government needs to limit and

decline the

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decline, the

number of fast

food

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restaurant. To conclude, people admire to eat fast

food

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due to the time taken to prepare a male.

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, they can save more time,

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, there are

huge number

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huge numbers

a huge number

of fast

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restaurants;

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, people can see it and reach it easily. The modern countries should be prohibited some of the fast

food

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restaurants in their cities because they need to save their citizens from any medical and health issues.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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259 words

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In many developed countries, fast food is cheap and widely available. Many people tend to choose unhealthy option. what can governments do to solve this problem.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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