plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of air and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

Global warming, icebergs melting in The north pole and major changes in large ecological systems are just small examples of the effects our way of living
have
Suggestion
has
on our
plannet
(astronomy) any of the nine large celestial bodies in the solar system that revolve around the sun and shine by reflected light; Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in order of their proximity to the sun; viewed from the constellation Hercules, all the planets rotate around the sun in a counterclockwise direction
planet
. Increased
used
Suggestion
use
of plastics and massive
use
of fuel
are
Suggestion
is
probably the main
contributers
someone who contributes (or promises to contribute) a sum of money
contributors
contributor
to these changes and only recently
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
have
being
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
trying to address these problems.
Although
the
use
of fuel is decreasing with the development of new ways for energy harvesting, there is still
massive
Suggestion
a massive use
use
of plastics worldwide. One of the most common examples of daily
plsatic
generic name for certain synthetic or semisynthetic materials that can be molded or extruded into objects or films or filaments or used for making e.g. coatings and adhesives
plastic
use
are
Suggestion
is
the disposable
plastic
bags. Many people, and I am one
them
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
, believe that the
use
of
plsatic
generic name for certain synthetic or semisynthetic materials that can be molded or extruded into objects or films or filaments or used for making e.g. coatings and adhesives
plastic
materials should be minimized as much as possible.
Plastic
is a non
natural non
Accept comma addition
natural, non
degradable material and reports of
plastic
waste found even in the most rural areas in the world are well known and
ducumented
furnished with or supported by documents
documented
. Recently,
plastic
waste was recorded in the deepest part of the ocean
!
Accept space
!
More so,
plastic
is toxic when ingested and there are countless of cases documented where animals like birds, reptiles and
dolphines
large slender food and game fish widely distributed in warm seas (especially around Hawaii)
dolphins
died due to
plastic
ingestion. Specifically,
plastic
bags are an even bigger threat as many animals suffocate and die when the bag
accidnetly
without advance planning
accidentally
covers their head. Recently, several
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
banned the
use
of
plastic
bags in local shops in an attempt to decrease the
use
of plastics.
This
, in my opinion, is a very smart decision.
Plastic
bags can be
replaecd
substitute a person or thing for (another that is broken or inefficient or lost or no longer working or yielding what is expected)
replaced
replicated
by other
materilze
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
such
as
recycles
Suggestion
recycling
recycled
papers
ot
away from home
out
at
or
reusable bags,
thus
decreasing the amount of garbage formed and, at the same time, promote the
use
of
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
friendly materials.
Also
,
this
decision is a positive step in educating the population that plastics
is
Suggestion
are
a hazardous material and should be
avoides
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoided
avoids
as much as possible. To conclude, I believe that
plastic
bags and other materials like single
use
coffee cups and boxes should be used as little as possible. There is no room for using plastics when other materials can be used. It is the only way we will be able to save our
plannet
(astronomy) any of the nine large celestial bodies in the solar system that revolve around the sun and shine by reflected light; Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in order of their proximity to the sun; viewed from the constellation Hercules, all the planets rotate around the sun in a counterclockwise direction
planet
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ban
  • non-biodegradable
  • landfills
  • marine life
  • entanglement
  • ecosystem
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • single-use
  • reusable
  • biodegradable
  • consumer habits
  • recycle
  • pollution
  • alternative solutions
  • legislation
  • waste management
  • environmentally friendly
  • toxic
  • decompose
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