Some people say the most important thing about being rich is that it give back or help the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, it is indubitable that
money
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is everything in
this
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world for
anyone whether
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anyone, whether
a person is rich or poor. Some believe that affluent people have
opportunity
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an opportunity
the opportunity
to help poor in terms of
money
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.
However
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, I disagree with the statement because, in my view, monetary help is not enough to underprivileged. I will discuss
number
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a number
the number
of ways to provide helping hand to overcome their present condition. At
first
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place, financial help could solve many problems of poor but it will not
last
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forever.
In other words
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,
instead
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of providing monetary support, it is better to help them with other means like education, skills development. It would
last
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forever with them,
hence
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, overcoming their current scenario is easy.
For example
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, one of my
friend
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friends
have started
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has started
slum nursery program
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a slum nursery program
the slum nursery program
slum nursery programs
, on their own, to teach
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
of
slum
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the slum
. He even saved
money
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for their
books
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book
expenses. These small approaches are plausible in
ever
(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
way.
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, sometimes natural calamities like drought, earthquake, flood create
vulnerable situation
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a vulnerable situation
for the citizen of affected areas.
Furthermore
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, natural
disaster's
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disaster
victims, they do not only require
finances but
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finances, but
also
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require moral support. The best approach is, by making our presence with them, and provide them with
regualr
in accordance with fixed order or procedure or principle
regular
need items like food, water,
first
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-aid, cloth etc. In conclusion,
money
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is
imperative factor
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an imperative factor
to live
life but
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life, but
we cannot take
this
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mean as for granted because monetary help would be short lived. Being rich is not mandatory to alleviate the problems of a person who is in need. Any
individual whether
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individual, whether
it be students, working professionals, could provide support on their level.
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