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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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People tend to do
mulitple
having or involving or consisting of more than one part or entity or individual
multiple
 jobs for their livelihood. There may lot many of
reasons
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the reasons
 behind that, some of them can be
passion
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a passion
, inadequate income and
security
 at present
job
.
let's
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Let's
 discuss them below
Firstly
, Passion, some of them are
interest
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interested
in
particular area
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a particular area
, but the pay may drive them to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 sector. These
type
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types
 of pupil tend to do
multiple
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the multiple job
a multiple job
multiple jobs
job
. One for their living and other for their passion.
Second
, inadequate income, nowadays because of huge
competion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
compassion
, either most of them are not getting the jobs or else working for low wages. For the one who is working in the latter
job
 tend to
work
 in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
job
, in their free time, in order to get extra income for better life
Third
,
job
security
, most on the
job
 in recent days
are based
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is based
 on the market. Companies are more profit oriented rather than considering the employee
benfits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
. In
this
 situation workers
are tend
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tend
 to
work
 in high pressure environment, not sure of their
job
security
. These
sort
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sorts
 of workers tend to look for another
job
 as they are unsure of the present
job
security
. Fourth,
further
 education, In the past people use to learn
upto
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up to
 their graduation and tend to
work
 on what they have graduated. But, in the present world due to globalisation, irrespective of
graduation they
Accept comma addition
graduation, they
 can
work
 in any sector if proven in the
intial
occurring at the beginning
initial
 interview. At
this
 point of time they have to learn new technologies in their respective field, not only to sustain but
also
 for
proffessional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
professionals
 growth. In conclusion, working in multiple
job
 can be of various
situation
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situations
.
Eventhough
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Even though
 there are
lot
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lots
 many who is working in a single
job
. Entirely its depends on the individual perspective.
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