It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

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Media nowadays plays an important role in every

persons

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person's

life. People depend on newspapers and channels to know what is going on around them. In the modern era broadcasting industry is more powerful than any other sectors, because it is directly connected to each and every

mans

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man

daily routine despite gender, age

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social status and wealth. There are some advantages and as well as disadvantages in being part of

this

media rich culture. On the one hand,

this

media influence is some way beneficial to the society especially in democratic countries. Because it ensures transparency in the system. As we all know, many of the nation's system

are

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corrupt to a certain level. It is the media who

usually brings

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usually bring

out

this

malpractices to the public and help to reduce

such

incidents.

For instance

, if we take the example of

3G spectrum scam

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the 3G spectrum scam

that happened in

India few years ago

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India a few years ago

, it was one

channels

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channel's

channel

sting operation that

shed

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sheds

light on

this

issue and triggered mass

outrange

a feeling of righteous anger

outrage

in India.

Furthermore

, these TV's and newspapers are helpful in passing important information to the public in a

quickest

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quick

quicker

manner, Like warning about natural disasters or accidents as

such

On the other hand

, the same media can act as a two side sword, when it comes to some controversial matters. These people can mislead the public and create panic among them easily. At present people believe almost everything floating in

media

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the media

, because there isn't any systems prevails to ensure the

genuinity

of the news.

Moreover

majority

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the majority

of the media houses are biased they broadcast

news according

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news, according

to their interest and preference. On top of that, these so called media people are misusing their power by invading the personal space of people. They are pointing their cameras to each and everything without considering a person's privacy. To recapitulate, the extensive presence of

media

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the media

is helpful

for

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the society to a some extent, but at the same time certain restrictions are required to control its misuse of accessibility.

Otherwise these

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Otherwise, these

media should follow some ethics and code of conduct when they are reporting on something.

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