Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Public

health

has become one of the most considerable problems nowadays. Some people suggest that increasing the number of sports facilities is an optimum method to improve it while opponents doubt the effect and argue that other measures should be implemented. In my opinion, several steps should be taken at the same time in order to achieve

this

goal. Supporters believe that people can have more opportunities to do physical

exercises if

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exercises, if

more sports facilities are constructed. In

this

way, people can have easier access to gyms and fitness

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

where they can jog, swim and do strength training more frequently, which has a positive impact on dwellers’

health

.

In contrast

,

for example

, if these facilities are far from residence area and business district, which means people have to spend several hours in commuting, there is no denying that they would rather go home and have a good sleep after a hectic day.

On the other hand

,

this

measure may not work since people are too busy to have time to care about their physical

health

. They often have no

chance but

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chance, but

to work overtime to earn enough salaries in order to cope with the soaring basic costs

such

as housing and food prices. And building more sports facilities sometimes even makes the situation worse because the government will probably impose heavier tax on workers so that more money can be raised for facility construction. As far as I’m concerned, several

measures including

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measures, including

increasing the

number

Suggestion

amount

of those facilities and income of residents should be combined to improve public

health

. People will feel less stressful with more money and

subsequently

begin to raise the awareness of doing physical activities to keep fit. The authority can

also

provide public bicycles and encourage people to use them to travel to work or get around.

This

can increase the amount of exercises for

citizens

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the citizens

which is beneficial to their physical conditions.