Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Write both point of views and state your opinion.
Many people opt sports like cricket, football, rugby, tennis and other main sub fields as their main career in life. During research, I read that according
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in the direction of
to
Gardener's eight multiple intelligences
, those who have selected sports as their profession are actually body smart Suggestion
the Gardener's eight multiple intelligences
that is
they are extremely fit for physical activities. In my country, famous sportsmen are highly paid for their winning matches, advertisements, brands attratction
, public following and countless awards. Despite of the fact that many people think that they are paid unjustly, I feel that they are paid for the the force by which one object attracts another
attraction
hardwork
and Suggestion
hard work
risk
they have taken in their life to lay every brick of their career.
First
of all, the hardwork
these sportsmen do to start their careers like the time they had invested in gaining the stamina and boosting physical strength to be fit for the chosen Suggestion
hard work
sports
. Suggestion
sport
Moreover
, these sportsmen spent handsome amount
of money on hiring personal trainers and Suggestion
a handsome amount
dietitian
who look after their fitness. They Suggestion
dietitians
a dietitian
also
work day and night to learn skills, techniques and modern workd
tricks to beat their competitors in games.
everything that exists anywhere
world
In addition
to the hardwork
, these sportsmen take a huge Suggestion
hard work
risk
of injuries, sucess
, growth, fear of an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
unknown
and defaming. If they are highly paid after becoming a celebrity, Suggestion
the unknown
this
is because they have inculcated risk
and hardwork
to be here at Suggestion
hard work
this
stage in their career.
On the contrary
, some people believe that these sportsmen are paid way more than what they deserve as people in other professions are doing more or less the same hardwork
and taken Suggestion
hard work
risk
to build their careers. Suggestion
risks
For example
, in the field of education, teachers do a lot of hardwork
before they go to the class like planning lessons, designing worksheets and bring innovation. Suggestion
hard work
Similarly
, business man take
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takes
risk
in setting up their own merchandise Suggestion
a risk
risks
companies but
the pay back Accept comma addition
companies, but
dont
only depend on do not
don't
hardwork
.
To conclude, Suggestion
hard work
inspite
of the fact that famous sportsmen who are now celebrities take Suggestion
in spite
huge amount
of money, some people think Suggestion
a huge amount
huge amounts
this
is not fair with people working in different fields. Howeve
, I feel that these sportsmen are paid for the Suggestion
However
hardwork
and Suggestion
hard work
risk
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