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You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbours disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter describe how this situation affects you; explain what steps you have taken to address the problem; ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.

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Dear Mr. Anderson, I am writing to discuss a severe problem with my upstairs neighbours and ask for your help. I moved to your apartment three months ago and, at
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everything was fine. The first difficulties began on the 15th of September, six weeks ago. As I found out, they have organized something like a small nightclub there and have parties at least twice a week. I have been preparing for the IELTS exams for the
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 twelve weeks, and all
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 noise during the night prevents me from sleeping and really grinds my gears. I can not rest properly, and I fear it will affect my test results next month. I tried speaking with them twice, I even called the police, but nothing changed. I found out that their flat is a rental too. Their landlord is Antony Tremaldi. Could you please contact him and share my situation with his tenants? I really hope we will handle
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 and I will not be forced to find a new place to live. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Adam Smith

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coherence cohesion
Try to maintain one main idea per paragraph to enhance clarity. Your third paragraph could be split into two separate ones: the first discussing the impact on your studies and the second describing the actions you have taken.
task achievement
Ensure that every paragraph contributes to the overall purpose of the letter. Revise the second paragraph to avoid unnecessary details such as the specific date when the issue began.
task achievement
Sustain a formal tone throughout the letter, and be sure to formally address and conclude the letter, as you have done well in this example.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Noise pollution
  • Disturbance
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Quality of life
  • Considerate behaviour
  • Residential quiet hours
  • Sound insulation
  • Mediation
  • Tenancy agreement
  • Follow-up
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