Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?

There is a hot debate over whether stricter

punishment

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should be given for breaking

traffic

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rules or not. In my opinion, harsh

punishment

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is not the solution in all the cases, it varies from

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to

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, as severity of

traffic

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offence

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and age of the

driver

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should be considered before deciding the

punishment

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.

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The first point

to consider here is the kind of

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offence

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, if it is life threatening

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offence

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offensively

like

hit

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a hit

and run, and drunk and drive,

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in that

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punishment

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like imprisonment with or without heavy fine is necessary. When they know the consequences of their careless actions, they would be more careful and serious while driving on

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the road

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, if the

traffic

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offence

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is minor and does not have potential impact on anyone

else

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else, then

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a warning to

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timers and

appropriate fine

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appropriate fines

an appropriate fine

on multiple occurrence should be given.

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, if rules like speeding, not wearing seatbelt and parking in no parking zone

are broken

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is broken, then

is broken then

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ticket with a fine should be charged.

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, if the same incident happens again and

again

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again, then

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driving license

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should be revoked for a week or so.

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would result in decrease in

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incidents.

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to the above two points, the other major thing to consider is the age of the

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. If

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driver

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the driver

a driver

is young or teenage

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the government should make a rule of attending Defensive Driving Classes mandatory, which will help the young drivers to learn about the importance of adhering to

traffic

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rules on

road

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the road

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, young people are more addictive to phone, they do text and call while driving more often. These classes will teach them about the consequence of all

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activities and help them in becoming

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a good driver

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. From what

have been discussed

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has been discussed

in

above points

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the above points

, in conclusion, having stricter

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for all

traffic

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offences is not necessary. Each

case

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should be treated differently based upon the kind of incident and age of

driver

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.