Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this case? What are the benefits of traveling for the traveler?
Travelling nowadays has become easier and simpler,
therefore
the number of travellers all over the world is incresing
. becoming greater or larger
increasing
all
needs for going overseas are a decision and a valid passport. It has myriads of merits and reasons and these will be explained in the following lines according to my point of view.
To start with, there are two main causes to travel abroad. Suggestion
All
Firstly
, folks travel for tourism
and there are many types of tourism
such
as religious tourism
and theraputical
tending to cure or restore to health
therapeutic
tourism
. For instance
, Saudi Arabia is considered a perfect example for religious tourism
because people travel there to visit Mecca and Madina to pray and the country depends mainly on money that it can get from this
tourism
. Secondly
, youngsters can go oveseas
for studying in great universities beyond or across the sea
overseas
such
as Oxford and Harvard, and England is a prime example for
that. The Guardian recently has published an article that shows about 30 % of international students globally study in the United Kingdom. Suggestion
of
hence
, these two examples illustrate the reasons (used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
of
travelling.
Suggestion
for
In addition
, travelling has one major advantage eventhough
in the same country. It makes Suggestion
even though
humanbeing
acts independently and acquires new skills to deal with different situations. Suggestion
human being
For
example when
I was ten I went to Canada with my family and Accept comma addition
example, when
this
experience has made me fluent in English and have self confidence although
we spent one month only. we
Suggestion
We
was camping
in forests in Suggestion
were camping
camped
Biritish
Columbia without any smart phones or even of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture
British
Internet
. Suggestion
the Internet
thus
, Suggestion
Thus
traveling
can give the act of going from one place to another
travelling
person's character
a lot of things.
In conclusion, Suggestion
a person's character
the person's character
traveling
has many merits and people appreciate it and that makes the world a small village with the act of going from one place to another
travelling
culutral
diversity. of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors
cultural
if
people do not see new cultures, they will miss many faces of lifeSuggestion
If
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