Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this case? What are the benefits of traveling for the traveler?

Travelling nowadays has become easier and simpler,
therefore
the number of travellers all over the world is
incresing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
.
all
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All
needs for going overseas are a decision and a valid passport. It has myriads of merits and reasons and these will be explained in the following lines according to my point of view. To start with, there are two main causes to travel abroad.
Firstly
, folks travel for
tourism
and there are many types of
tourism
such
as religious
tourism
and
theraputical
tending to cure or restore to health
therapeutic
tourism
.
For instance
, Saudi Arabia is considered a perfect example for religious
tourism
because people travel there to visit Mecca and Madina to pray and the country depends mainly on money that it can get from
this
tourism
.
Secondly
, youngsters can go
oveseas
beyond or across the sea
overseas
for studying in great universities
such
as Oxford and Harvard, and England is a prime example
for
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of
that. The Guardian recently has published an article that shows about 30 % of international students globally study in the United Kingdom.
hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
, these two examples illustrate the reasons
of
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for
travelling.
In addition
, travelling has one major advantage
eventhough
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even though
in the same country. It makes
humanbeing
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human being
acts independently and acquires new skills to deal with different situations.
For
example when
Accept comma addition
example, when
I was ten I went to Canada with my family and
this
experience has made me fluent in English and have self confidence
although
we spent one month only.
we
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We
was camping
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were camping
camped
in forests in
Biritish
of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture
British
Columbia without any smart phones or even
Internet
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the Internet
.
thus
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Thus
,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
can give
person's character
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a person's character
the person's character
a lot of things. In conclusion,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
has many merits and people appreciate it and that makes the world a small village with
culutral
of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors
cultural
diversity.
if
Suggestion
If
people do not see new cultures, they will miss many faces of life
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  • Technological advancements
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Globalization
  • Professional development
  • Social media platforms
  • Exotic locations
  • Cultural exchange
  • Personal growth
  • Adaptable
  • Open-minded
  • Mental health
  • Daily routines
  • Responsibilities
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