The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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our roads safer. It is argued that harsher punishments should be imposed to ensure traffic

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as the sole solution, from my point of view, it does not seem perfectly reasonable as there are a large number of other effective approaches that could

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issue. There are several reasons why rule-breakers should be given stricter punishments,

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the execution of punishment by increasing the fine amount for rule violations. It is said that the increasing number of

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accidents is due to the lenient fine,

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, more money as fine would somehow deter reckless drivers, who often exceed the speed limit or use mobile phones while driving, from driving too quickly.

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, receiving severe sanctions when violating the law while driving,

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as licence suspension or even

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a prison sentence

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for some who cause severe accidents, would promote driving habits. Apart from the practical benefits expressed above, I believe that many more other measures could be taken to improve the

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of our roads. It is true that rule violation is the chief culprit

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causing

accidents,

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, poor weather or geographical conditions

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have a negative impact on

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safety

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. To tackle these issues, government should invest more in

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reconstruction or provide extensive warning signs on high-risk routes.

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, public transport should

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be improved, which would mean citizens no longer need to travel by their personal cars. In conclusion, It seems to me that severe punishments would be a viable measure,

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, there are several other approaches to be taken to improve the

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of the

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