Nowadays, many families move to different countries. Some people think that children has many benefits while some other consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country.

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Developed countries have countless prominent features ranging from public services and less corruption to economic stability. Most people get

stimulate

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stimulated

by the features of those countries. So, presently, numerous families migrate to other nation's. Living in a foreign

country

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is generally considered by some to be worthwhile for juveniles;

however

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, others assert that it is an intricate for them. I will discuss both the reviews in

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essay, and try to draw a conclusion. On the one hand, some people opine that the juveniles can acquire

tremendous

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tremendously

advantageous when their entire family

imigrates

migrate to a new environment

immigrated

emigrated

immigrates

to abroad.

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, an advance education system of

such

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countries plays an indispensable role in learning with

practical approach

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a practical approach

practical approaches

, which helps to attain great

carrier

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

opportunities.

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, Sundar Pichai, who is the CEO of the Google, comes from India and he did his higher education in

USA

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the USA

, and go himself into a position that

fullfilled

completed to perfection

fulfilled

his

carrier

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

ambition.

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, if many families move to other nation's, their children will not feel anxious regards to own future due to availability of innumerable jobs.

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, due to allocating much time to work, they will not be

indulge

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indulging

in any bad accompany.

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, that's why it is believed by several individuals that the offerings have multifarious merits.

On the other hand

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, some individuals think that the juveniles have to face

regerous

rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard

rigorous

condition. Since they would suffer from disparity by relocating to

overseas resulting

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overseas, resulting

in they will not relish their life as much. The offerings do face obstacles,

such

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as different food, unfamiliar living circumstances, and local traditions diversity.

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, owing to

this

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not only creates lack of stability, but

also

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creates some confusion.

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, the patriotic feelings and the sense of belonging to children' home

country

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are not remained strong despite their parents living with them.

This

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clearly shows that why some masses opine that it will be intricate for them. In conclusion,

although

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the children' do acquire an abundance of benefits ranging from an advance academic syllabus, job placements to get away from bad accompany of friends of their home

country

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. Whilst according to

others it

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others, it

is challenging condition

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is a challenging condition

for them due to cultural differences and weaken sense of belonging to their home

country

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. In my opinion, I consider that the juveniles have adequate benefits undoubtedly because of an effective education system, and an ideal job

opportunities

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opportunity

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

389 words

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Nowadays, many families move to different countries. Some people think that children has many benefits while some other consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country.

Your opinion

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?