Some people say that the main environmental problem in our time is loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many people say that the major
problem
in our environment, nowadays, is
lacking
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lack
of many
species
of plants and animals
,
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,
while others think that
there
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they're
more important
problem
than
this
loss. In
this
essay, I will illustrate both views and my opinion, as well. Losing many
species
is a serious
problem
, as many scientists are searching for
a
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an
urgent solution for it. Because of greedy desires of humans, they are killing many
species
for trivial reasons,
for
example killing
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example, killing
a rare
species
of snakes to just take its skin to manufacture an expensive type of watches or cutting a
trees
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tree
in
jugles
a location marked by an intense competition and struggle for survival
jungles
goggles
to get
paper
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the paper
.
On the other hand
, many people think that there are more important problems than losing
species
of plants and animals. Because the
problem
of lacking animal can be in
favor
promote over another
favour
of
human's race
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the human race
human race
, many people can small
this
problem
.
Public
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The public
can appreciate and give attention to problems that they face in their traditional life;
for example
, people can give attention to
problem
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the problem
problems
of global warming because they can feel its troubles; they can feel hot and notice the
unreasonably
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unreasonable
increase in temperature in summer. All of these problems can make people deprecate the
problem
of losing many
species
. In my opinion, Public and government must give attention to both problems:
problem
of losing
species
and other problems we face in our traditional life.
Moreover
,
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,
scientists should
,
Accept space
,
in every way
,
Accept space
,
reduce the effects of both problems
.
Accept space
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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