In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

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Children are restricted to go according to their wish in some of the areas, whereas in other places they have given

atmost

of the greatest possible degree or extent or intensity

utmost

at most

freedom

to do what they want to do.

This

was always debate as it has its own advantages and disadvantages.

Firstly

, let discuss regarding the pro's of giving

freedom

, to kids. They should be given free hand in order to take their

decissions

the act of making up your mind about something

decisions

decision

regarding their interests. If we are going to be friendly with

them

Accept comma addition

them, then

then

we will come to know about their problem's and difficulties they are having in their

life

. At the same time, too much

freedom

, spoil's them by lack of proper parental

guidence

something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

guidance

For example

, if we behave as friend, to

them

Accept comma addition

them, then

then

they are going to share the problem they are facing either with their studies or else with their

presonal

concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality

personal

life

. If we

haven't been

Suggestion

were not

then

they will take their own decision's and may lead them to

worse situation

Suggestion

a worse situation

worse situations

On the other hand

, If we restrict them by imposing all the rules,

then

they look for friends to share their feelings. If they got

good friend

Suggestion

a good friend

good friends

, they are lucky else they may exploit them.

Also

, there are chances of going on wrong future path.

For example

, most of the minor criminal's are due to lack of good parental assistance to them. Restrictions on them should improve their

life

, not to spoil them. In conclusion, Either too much restriction's nor too much

freedom

will spoil our kid

life

. So, we have to be friendly with along with guiding them what not to do and why not to.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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