Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?

There has been a growing trend for people to make themselves look younger despite their age. Many reasons underlie
this
practice,
the most prominence
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the most prominent
most prominent
of which being to heighten one’s confidence. While it is superficially beneficial, there is a myriad of drawbacks, some can be fatal at times, that should not be overlooked. The advance of social media has resulted in the exposure to the ostensible good lives of famous people
such
as celebrities.
This
is just one of the inherent negative impacts that come with the internet. One of the aspects that entices those who care much about their outward appearances is the seemingly-ever-young bodies of some public figures. Having seen the impossible standards of beauty, some will think
to
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of
themselves as to why they do not have
such
appeal, resulting in low self-esteem that enough to get them to do something, Most certainly, only few people can reach them to personally ask for advices, while the rest are only able to do trials and errors at best. By
this
, I point to some reasonable efforts,
for
instance consulting
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instance, consulting
to beauty experts or dermatologists; and conducting healthier lifestyles, but
also
the inane and unreliable ones, including illegal harmful
chemicals
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chemical
injections. People, driven
with
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by
cloudy minds, often cannot discern the good from the bad, ended up in regret and
uncoverable
new flaws in their bodies. There have been too many cases of malpractice in
this
area, accentuating the red flags on
this
course.
In addition
to the wrong motivation, the practice itself is strife with dangers, convincing me that it is best to avoid altering the natural process of the body. To conclude, people should be more grateful of what they have,
instead
of
spot-lighting
a focus of public attention
spotlighting
what they do not possess.
However
, if one insists on giving a try,
this
kind of cosmetic enhancement should always be taken with a grain of salt. People must make sure that the road they are willing to take is thought through and ensure that whatever they are going to try is done conforming to certain health standards.
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