Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

Nowadays, Poverty became

major problem

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a major problem

in almost all the developing countries. Family with less income earning which cannot support the basic requirements of the people, is known to be a poor. There may be many reasons for

this

cause, some of them will discuss as following. One of the most important

reason

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reasons

employement

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employed

employment

unemployment

. Lack of

job

opportunities reduces the household income, in turn, reduces the standard of living. Education

also

serious issue which contributes

for

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the cause. Lack of proper education may

hampers

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hamper

the

job

chances, which in turn leaves the person with less or no income. Once the earnings are less,

then

they need to compromise on the basic

neccessities

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessities

. Coming to

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preventive

steps

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step

Government

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the Government

need

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needs

to provide

job

opportunities

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for

individual's who are below the poverty line. They

also

need to provide free education and medical facilities for the needy.

For example

, If

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resource is well educated

then

the chances for him getting a

job

are more than the one who is less educated. In conclusion, Main cause of poverty is either education or

employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

. If

Government

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the government

the Government

take

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takes

neccessary

absolutely essential

necessary

actions

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actions, then

then

they

this

can be eliminated. Not only the

people

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peoples'

peoples

representatives but

Accept comma addition

representatives, but

also

well being families

also

can contribute to

elimate

terminate, end, or take out

eliminate

the poverty.

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?