Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

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Nowadays, Poverty became
major problem
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a major problem
in almost all the developing countries. Family with less income earning which cannot support the basic requirements of the people, is known to be a poor. There may be many reasons for
this
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cause, some of them will discuss as following. One of the most important
reason
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reasons
is
employement
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employed
employment
unemployment
. Lack of
job
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opportunities reduces the household income, in turn, reduces the standard of living. Education
also
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serious issue which contributes
for
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to
the cause. Lack of proper education may
hampers
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hamper
the
job
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chances, which in turn leaves the person with less or no income. Once the earnings are less,
then
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they need to compromise on the basic
neccessities
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
. Coming to
an
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a
preventive
steps
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step
,
Government
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the Government
need
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needs
to provide
job
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opportunities
to
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for
individual's who are below the poverty line. They
also
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need to provide free education and medical facilities for the needy.
For example
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, If
an
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a
resource is well educated
then
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the chances for him getting a
job
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are more than the one who is less educated. In conclusion, Main cause of poverty is either education or
employement
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
. If
Government
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the government
the Government
take
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takes
neccessary
absolutely essential
necessary
actions
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actions, then
then
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they
this
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can be eliminated. Not only the
people
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peoples'
peoples
representatives but
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representatives, but
also
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well being families
also
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can contribute to
elimate
terminate, end, or take out
eliminate
the poverty.
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