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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
Nowadays, Waste is increasing day by day because of lot many reasons. Following are important, that we need to take into consideration seriously.
Generally we
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Generally, we
 are creating
an
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a
 useless mainly by ignorance. One of
such
 case is,
amount
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the amount
 of food wastage. In
present world
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the present world
 most of the family members are working and hardly find time to cook food. In
such
an
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a
 scenario,
lot
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lots
a lot
 of
vegatables
edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
vegetables
,
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,
 that are bought for cooking are getting waste, due to purchase of dinner from near by hotel. Reason behind
this
 is mainly could be either parents are not having enough time to cook or else left with sufficient energy for preparation. Groceries that are bought, can be given to the poor,
after
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over
specific time
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a specific time
,
instead
 of throwing them in
garbage
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the garbage
a garbage
.
Second
 and foremost important is rise of income. In recent decades, income level of
an
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a
 family got increased, because of which people tend to spend more. In
this
 situation
instead
 making the damage objects repaired, they tend to throw them and want to buy new one.
Government
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The government
 should impose taxes on the waste quantity from
an
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a
 family, so that people tend to reduce the wastage. Not only
taxes but
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taxes, but
also
 need to create awareness in
general public
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the general public
, so that they can try to recycle their won items. Recycle of
thrown
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throwing
 away products can be
next level initiation
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a next level initiation
. In conclusion, Proper attention from individuals and necessary actions
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of
 law can reduce the amount of garbage and can increase the reusability of
owned
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owning
goods
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the goods
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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