some people prefer to spend their lives doing same things and avoiding change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #lives #change

Change

is the only constant thing in

life

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is inevitable in each

one

life

however

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However

, it can be beautiful or can be painful but sometimes it is both. There

are

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abundance

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an abundance

of people around who spend their lives doing similar things which may include staying at

one

place, doing

one

job for the entire lifetime or staying at

one

firm decision always regardless of considering any new factor affecting the situation.

refers to the speaker or writer

believe people like these are more stable and contented when compared to people facing constant changes in their

life

these

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These

kind of individuals does not have to stress out

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about

various things and remains uninfluenced by the fancy world where the people are busy showing off their expensive lifestyles by constantly

changinf

marked by continuous change or effective action

changing

their houses, cars etc.

Also

, these people have become so comfortable in their own

life

and does not think of stepping out of their comfort zone. In contrary to

this

, there are people who

does not like

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do not like

doing

same things

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the same things

everytime

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every time

and enjoy exploring the vast world of opportunities and challenges.

these

Suggestion

These

people are progressive people who like experimenting and discovering new potentials in

oneself which

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oneself, which

can

further

help them achieve great heights. I think, in

this

ever-

changinf

marked by continuous change or effective action

changing

society it

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society, it

is important to

change

and imbibe new

lifwstyle

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

according to our surroundings. As it is said that "be a

change

you want to see", so, by changing

youself

reflexive form of "you"

yourself

you are developing your skills of adaptability and

adjustability

which bring a lot of insights in an individual. In a nutshell,

life

series

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a series

of natural and spontaneous changes.

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should not resist them and let

the thing named or in question

flow. In my opinion,

change

can ne

painful but

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painful, but

nothing can be more painful as

stucking

close-fitting hosiery to cover the foot and leg; come in matched pairs (usually used in the plural)

stocking

sticking

staking

somewhere you don't belong.

Also

, a

change

can be progressive or regressive depending upon what the outcome is and may vary for

evry

(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception

every

individual.

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