some people prefer to spend their lives doing same things and avoiding change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Change
is the only constant thing in
life
.
it
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It
is inevitable in each
one
's
life
.
however
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However
, it can be beautiful or can be painful but sometimes it is both. There
are
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is
abundance
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an abundance
of people around who spend their lives doing similar things which may include staying at
one
place, doing
one
job for the entire lifetime or staying at
one
firm decision always regardless of considering any new factor affecting the situation.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe people like these are more stable and contented when compared to people facing constant changes in their
life
.
these
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These
kind of individuals does not have to stress out
on
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about
various things and remains uninfluenced by the fancy world where the people are busy showing off their expensive lifestyles by constantly
changinf
marked by continuous change or effective action
changing
their houses, cars etc.
Also
, these people have become so comfortable in their own
life
and does not think of stepping out of their comfort zone. In contrary to
this
, there are people who
does not like
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do not like
doing
same things
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the same things
everytime
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every time
and enjoy exploring the vast world of opportunities and challenges.
these
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These
people are progressive people who like experimenting and discovering new potentials in
oneself which
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oneself, which
can
further
help them achieve great heights. I think, in
this
ever-
changinf
marked by continuous change or effective action
changing
society it
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society, it
is important to
change
and imbibe new
lifwstyle
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
according to our surroundings. As it is said that "be a
change
you want to see", so, by changing
youself
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
you are developing your skills of adaptability and
adjustability
which bring a lot of insights in an individual. In a nutshell,
life
is
series
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a series
of natural and spontaneous changes.
we
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We
should not resist them and let
ir
the thing named or in question
it
flow. In my opinion,
change
can ne
painful but
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painful, but
nothing can be more painful as
stucking
close-fitting hosiery to cover the foot and leg; come in matched pairs (usually used in the plural)
stocking
sticking
staking
somewhere you don't belong.
Also
, a
change
can be progressive or regressive depending upon what the outcome is and may vary for
evry
(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
individual.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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