It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

one
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One
of
the greater
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the great
the greatest
early
writer
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writers
once said that " A
friend
in need is a
friend
indeed". If we are true
friend we
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friend, we
always help each other in need.
some
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Some
people would argue that, we should not borrow
money
from a
friend
, because it leads to damage or harm the friendship. Others think that there is no problem borrowing
money
from a
friend
until unless we return on time.
after
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After
considering all aspects
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally feel that taking
money
from a
friend
is not
a
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an
issue. A
friend
can
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
borrow
money
from other friends if
its
the thing named or in question
it
needs him. They can
justified
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justify
by
folloing
about to be mentioned or specified
following
reasons and examples.
lets
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
Lets
take an example of two close friends.
one
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One
of them is rich and
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
is very poor and he cannot even run his family, some time may need help from
wealthy
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a wealthy friend
wealthy friends
friend
. In case the
friend
who is poor can ask the rich
friend
for
money
to overcome his current problems and crisis
,
Accept space
,
when ever he has enough
money
he can
retun
go or come back to place, condition, or activity where one has been before
return
retain
it back to his
friend
.
Furthermore
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
feel that poor
friend
will return the
money
back to his
friend
their friendship and bonding will become stronger.
similar
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Similar
to the above example, consider an example of
unfortunate situvation
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an unfortunate situation
unfortunate situation
unfortunate situations
the unfortunate situation
. Where
one
of the
friend
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friends
or
one
of the
familly
a social unit living together
family
member of
friend
suddenly meets an accident and he asks you for
money
.
assuming
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Assuming
that you have enough
money
, and you are sure that your
friend
will return
money
when he is able to recover from
this
unfortunate
situvation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
, will you
not provide
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don't provide
aren't providing
him required
money
.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally feel,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
provide him with the
money
. Others might cite, it is not good
idea borrow
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idea to borrow money
money
from friends because it may harm the friendship
.
Accept space
.
They might provide some reasons for supporting
this
argument. But
iam
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
am
very much inclined and having a feel that it is mutually
understading
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understood
understanding
of friends which keep them close.
Finally
,
Accept space
,
after weighing
instaces
an occurrence of something
instances
and considering both sides. I want to conclude that their no harm in borrowing
money
from
friend
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friends
a friend
untill
up to, before the time
until
unless the reason for borrowing
money
is genuine and we
retun
go or come back to place, condition, or activity where one has been before
return
retain
returned
it back on time.
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