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Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries.Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #jobs #employees
Developed countries benefit
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The developed countries benefit
 of trade should be acknowledged to talented and brilliant worker's migrating from underdeveloped part of the world No knowledge is lost as it can be acquired from anyone who deem fit to offer their best. To start with, migrants from poor countries would give all it requires to survive in an unknown world
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To
this
 fact
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the skilled and knowledgeable ones sacrifice all it takes by doing their jobs in a
well
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good
 and pleasing manner so as to satisfy their employers and when
this
 is noticed
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they are more valuable and their monetary aspect of life is attended to.
For example
, Nigerians are good in craft making and exceptional at it.If allowed to
exhibits
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exhibit
 more of
this
 in a country like the USA it will be a double
benefits
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benefit
 to both parties.
Furthermore
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if jobs are provided for
this
 brilliant worker's, the more developed the country will be in terms of
man power
the force of workers available
manpower
.
For example
, projects that
needs
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need
 urgent and quick completion will be attended to within a short
timing
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time
 and
this
 will foster more advancement of projects like road and bridge making
In contrast
 to all
this
plural of "this"
these
those
 additions
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if the opportunities are given to
this
 worker's without be
monitoring
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monitored
 and accessed on a regular basis
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they will divert all the gains and profits to their country home In conclusion
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even though there might be few lapses allowing the talented ones of poor countries to work in the western world
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the benefits of
such
 outweighs it all.
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