As a country develops, people tend to buy more cars. Do the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment.

People

usually purchase more

cars

when a nation progresses. In my opinion,

this

could be

advantages

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for them as it is convenient and useful in daily use but

also

has

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few drawbacks to be taken into account. Admittedly, there are some obvious benefits of buying a car.

Firstly

, it is very convenient to use when you have a big family.

For example

, if a family

is consists

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of four to five

people

, it

oftens

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often

becomes difficult to travel together from

one

place to another. Public transport might be a solution but not all the

times

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Hence

if a family of more than five members buys a car, they can comfortably move

where ever

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needed.

Secondly

,

cars

can be used in harsh

climate

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especially

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during summer when the temperature is extremely hot. Since

air

conditioners can be installed in

cars

,

one

can avoid the heat outside.

Thus

,

one

can protect themselves from

the

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from the weather.

Nevertheless

, there are some crucial disadvantages which cannot be ignored.

One

of the main disadvantages is the effect of smoke emitted

of

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the

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cars

and other vehicles. These gases

rises

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in the

air

and

causes

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air

pollution.

This

will not only harm the respiratory system of

people

but

also

has

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serious effects on the environment.

Due to

the rising level of pollution in

air

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the air

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, the ozone layer, which protects us from

sun's

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harmful rays, is becoming thin. The other vital drawback is the congestion which is caused

with

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the increase in the number of

cars

on

roads

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. Heavy congestion on roads creates major difficulties for

people

.

For example

, extreme traffic on roads causes

delay

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for an ambulance to reach

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hospital on time.

As a result

, the patient might lose his life.

To conclude

, I think though we have many benefits with

cars

but

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the drawbacks

such

as pollution and congestion are more important than the advantages.