In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Owing to the increases in the

families

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family's

families'

family

expenditures.Some people think that

both

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the father and the mother need to have a job.

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, there are others who believe that parents support it is more

improtant

of great significance or value

important

than extra income.I will discuss

both

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sides of the argument and I will summaries my personal conclusion.

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On

the one hand, a plenty number of people think that having

both

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parents working is a necessary these days.Many things become more expensive than it used to be in the past.For

exaple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

, to rent a house in the city

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

that cost a lot of

mony which

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money, which

money which

it is almost

inpossible

not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with

impossible

to

affored

be able to spare or give up

afford

with

a

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A

one

salery

something that remunerates

salary

celery

, because of that

both

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of them need to go out to work.

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, another reason is to give their

childeren

a young person of either sex

children

a good education.Without

both

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of them working

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things cannot be done.

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, there is some people believe that they needed at lest one of the parents with them.They have

feelt

a fabric made of compressed matted animal fibers

felt

feet

failed

lack supported due to their

parents

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parents'

parent's

absence.

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, money could be important, but not more than spending time

togther

in contact with each other or in proximity

together

.Indeed, not having their parents around could have had a bad effect on the

them

a cooperative unit (especially in sports)

team

theme

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for

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For

instance, there was a study claimed that

childeren

a young person of either sex

children

with personality problems had spent less time with

there

of them or themselves

their

parents.

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can be a good reason for parents to start thinking about the most important thing to them, their kids. In conclusion, parents need to put their kids

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, making a good money it is a good thing for the family.

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,

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having time for them it is as important as making money.