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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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Nowadays, most of the people tend to have more than one
job
. There may be lots of reasons behind that, but one
work
 profile
is consider
Suggestion
is considered
 as an old fashion, by many.
Let's
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
Lets
 discuss in detail regarding the same in the latter part. Coming to
discussion
Suggestion
the discussion
 regarding single career, In the present world, expenditure does not meet the income. In
this
 scenario most of the individual
tend
Suggestion
tends
 to do
multiple
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the multiple job's
job
's to meet their expenses.
For example
, let's assume that, general spending of
an
Suggestion
a
 family is around three thousand dollars and earning are same. In
this
 case, for an emergency medical needs they should have
an
Suggestion
a
 backup. As said, one shot two birds, they can meet their expenses and can have backup for unknown situations, with multiple
job
's. Another reason might be
passion
any substance that causes injury or illness or death of a living organism
poison
. Because of salary they may choose the regular
work
, but out of passion, they have gone for the other.
For example
,
An
Suggestion
A
 software engineer is working for
an
Suggestion
a
 company because of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
pay but
Accept comma addition
pay, but
 he does the business because of his interest. In the present competitive world,
everyone should be always
Suggestion
everyone should always be
 in learning mode, in order to update their skills.
For example
, previously factories are run mostly by
human's but
Accept comma addition
human's, but
now
referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present
no
machine replace
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machine to replace
 most of their
work
. So those who know to operate them has
an
Suggestion
a
job
 and
rest
Suggestion
the rest
 are discarded. So education becomes
an
Suggestion
a
continuos
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
continuing
 process throughout our life, to get upgrade to
latest technology
Suggestion
the latest technology
. In conclusion, leaving about the topic of fashion, multiple
work
 profiles became
mandate
Suggestion
mandated
 for some and desire fulfilment or time pass for other's. Whatever may be most of us are workers in various stream's.
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