The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Nowadays, most of the people tend to have more than one
job
. There may be lots of reasons behind that, but one
work
profile
is consider
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is considered
as an old fashion, by many.
Let's
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
Lets
discuss in detail regarding the same in the latter part. Coming to
discussion
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the discussion
regarding single career, In the present world, expenditure does not meet the income. In
this
scenario most of the individual
tend
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tends
to do
multiple
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the multiple job's
job
's to meet their expenses.
For example
, let's assume that, general spending of
an
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a
family is around three thousand dollars and earning are same. In
this
case, for an emergency medical needs they should have
an
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a
backup. As said, one shot two birds, they can meet their expenses and can have backup for unknown situations, with multiple
job
's. Another reason might be
passion
any substance that causes injury or illness or death of a living organism
poison
. Because of salary they may choose the regular
work
, but out of passion, they have gone for the other.
For example
,
An
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A
software engineer is working for
an
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a
company because of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
pay but
Accept comma addition
pay, but
he does the business because of his interest. In the present competitive world,
everyone should be always
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everyone should always be
in learning mode, in order to update their skills.
For example
, previously factories are run mostly by
human's but
Accept comma addition
human's, but
now
referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present
no
machine replace
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machine to replace
most of their
work
. So those who know to operate them has
an
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a
job
and
rest
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the rest
are discarded. So education becomes
an
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a
continuos
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
continuing
process throughout our life, to get upgrade to
latest technology
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the latest technology
. In conclusion, leaving about the topic of fashion, multiple
work
profiles became
mandate
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mandated
for some and desire fulfilment or time pass for other's. Whatever may be most of us are workers in various stream's.
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