Hosting international sporting competitions is good,but few people think this causes too many problems. Explain both views and tell your opinion.

Now a
days
Suggestion
day
, a lot of International sports tournaments are taking place all over the world to discover and encourage growing talents. While some argue that
this
move is creating problems rather than any good,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
group of people argue that
this
is a great initiative and I
also
agree with
this
side of the argument. On the
one
hand, many feel that hosting games
at
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on
a global scale is a waste of time and money. They
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that money should be spent more on national interests like fighting poverty or building better infrastructure for the country which will benefit the society. Especially for people belonging to those
under-developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
countries that are struggling to meet even the basic necessities, these kind of activities seems to be a lavish affair. They would rather prefer wealthy nations to provide them with monitory help rather than enjoying and spending
huge amount
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huge amounts
a huge amount
of cash for these so called unwanted affairs.
On the other hand
, there
are
Suggestion
is
another set of people whose opinion is
exact opposite
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the exact opposite
from
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of
the
aformentioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
one
. They consider these events as a platform to promote different games and thereby maintaining a healthy relationship across different countries.
This
brings the whole world together as they cheer for their own participants and at the same time create a sense of nationalism which in turn is a
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
aspect.
Moreover
,
these
denotes a person or thing
this
kind of global events attracts a lot of tourists to which ever country
that is
hosting
there by
by that means or because of that
thereby
improving the economy and income.
For instance
, 2012 World Cup Cricket held in India helped to generate a revenue of around 1.2 million only by selling the tickets. Another aspect is the improvement in sports facilities that comes as a bonus along with the event which helps lot of young children to start taking sports seriously. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
it is always good to have a healthy relationship between countries and global sports competitions can be considered as
one
of the best ways to ensure
this
. In my opinion, all nations should make a point to host at least
one
event in twenty years.
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