In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think ate the main causes of crime? How can we deal with these causes?
Nowadays, the multiple kinds of
crime
rate Use synonyms
are rising
compared to the Suggestion
were rising
last
two decades ago in almost all countries. The essay will examine the main causes of increasing Linking Words
crime
and possible solutions of Use synonyms
this
problem.
The two main causes of Linking Words
crime
are lack of employment opportunities and the usage of drugs. The unemployment is a big issue not only Use synonyms
in
least developing Suggestion
at
countries but
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countries, but
also
in developing and developed countries. As the increase of jobless population, people often commit the common crimes for their Linking Words
survival
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survival, such
such
as robbery, pickpocketing and stealing. Linking Words
Next
, the consumption of drugs, especially among the teenagers and adults, becomes very problematic in most countries. The surge of global drug dealings leads the huge amount of narcotic addicted people. According the recent news and reports, the level of Linking Words
crime
related to drugs shows an upward trend significantly in all regions of the world.
Some possible solutions to Use synonyms
this
problem are creating the job opportunities and tight control of drugs. The government should perform as a major role in order to remove those causes, Linking Words
for instance
, enhancing the economy of Linking Words
country
by means of promoting small and medium enterprises and inviting the foreign investments so that there will be a variety of Suggestion
the country
position
for professionals and non-Suggestion
positions
professions
. For the regarding the drugs, it a person engaged in one of the learned professions
professionals
is fully relied
on the law. Suggestion
fully relies
In addition
, the strong sentence Linking Words
such
as capital punishment should apply Linking Words
for
those people who trade drugs. Suggestion
to
Besides
, the drug rehabilitation Linking Words
center
should establish for those an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
drug
addicted people rather than Suggestion
drugs
sending
them to prison. The public awareness of narcotic should be distributed through the media as well as social media. Suggestion
send
This
way, people will be conscious of the danger of drugs.
To conclude, the lack of Linking Words
job vacancy
and the consumption of narcotic take people into Suggestion
job vacancies
the job vacancy
criminal case
. Suggestion
a criminal case
criminal cases
However
, the effective solutions can be done by removing root causes.
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