Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days the
amount
of
rubbish
has significantly increased.There
is
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are
some reasons for that
also
, there
is
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are
number
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a number
of
solution
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solutions
which should be implemented to by the government reduce
this
problem. One reason for
this
issue is, the overuse of
plastic
.The
amount
of
this
plastic
rubbish
is the highest among other shape of wastes.
This
kind of wastes
have
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has
a major damage effect on both people and the environment.For
exaple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, I have noticed that
plastic
product
taks
carry out
takes
away longer than other products to decompose. Perhaps, hundred of years.
this
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This
have
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has
a
dircte
command with authority
direct
effect on the issue of global warming.
a
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A
possible solution for
this
problem that, the government need to imposes people to start
useing
an act that exploits or victimizes someone (treats them unfairly)
using
a
sefer
free from danger or the risk of harm
safer
silver
cipher
alternatives
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alternative
sush
to so extreme a degree
such
as, papers.By
donig I believe
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am I believing
doing I believe
have I believed
that the
amount
of
plastic
rubbish
will noticeable decrease. Another reason
is not having dispose
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has not disposed
does not dispose
doesn't dispose
hasn't disposed
of
this
plural of "this"
these
wastes an appropriate way, many countries tend to burn their wastes.In general
this
can take days and, with the large
amount
of wastes that every
countries
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country
preduce
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produces
produce
produced
per day,
this
operation will never end.
This
might be the main cause of respiratory diseases.
For instance
, I have read that people how lived near to
this
area which wastes burn at have
showed
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shown
a high percentage of respiratory diseases among other people.A feasible solution is to stop using
this
method. I think that The government need to find other and more safer way to deal with
this
rubbish
rither
after a negative statement used as an intensive meaning something like 'likewise' or 'also'
either
rather
than burning it. In conclusion.
This
rubbish
can damage both the
eirth
the 3rd planet from the sun; the planet we live on
earth
art
and
people
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peoples'
peoples
health.All countries need to stop
underrated
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underrating
this
problem. The
governmnt
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should work side by side with the residents to control the
amonut
a quantity of money
amount
of
rubbish
that produce every year.
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