Some people say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy with everything organized and in t he correct places. What is your opinion about it?

There are some people who like to make their
home
and
work
a place where work is done
workplace
place
neat and tidy with well organized things and put those things in the
appropiate
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
places.
On the other hand
, some people consider that it is not much important for them and they can live and
work
in a messy
place
. In my opinion,
home
and
work
a place where work is done
workplace
place
are the places in which we spend our most of
time
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the time
in daily route so that it should be a nice
place
for both working and living.
First
of all,
ther
in or at that place
there
are several advantages
from
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of
for
keeping
home
orderly
such
as putting things in the suitable places.
As a result
, when we need something, we can pick up easily from its
place
in
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at
home
. If there are toddlers and children
in
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at
home
, the
hazadous
involving risk or danger
hazardous
substances
likewise
spirit, insect killer
sapray
a pesticide in suspension or solution; intended for spraying
spray
are
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is
very dangerous for them.
Puting
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Putting
thsoe
plural of "this"
these
those
toxic materials with random order after using can be very harmful to the
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
.
Besides
, a neat and tidy
home
can make
ys
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
us
use
a recreation
place
when we come back from a stressful
work
a place where work is done
workplace
place
. How can we relax with a messy
apperance
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
appearances
in our
home
?
Secondly
, our
work
a place where work is done
workplace
place
is our
second
home
. Like a
home
, it should be a systematic organization with the office things.
This
is very important to attract our
clients
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clients'
client's
impression. The banks and the private
hosiptals
a health facility where patients receive treatment
hospitals
are good examples. When we go the bank, the well organized reception desk and living room can provide our satisfaction for their services at a
first
glance so that we prefer to proceed with them. To conclude,
although
some people might say that it is not much more important to focus keeping
home
and
work
place
tidy, keeping
home
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the home
and
work
a place where work is done
workplace
place
in that way can provide many benefits for our daily life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Efficiency
  • Productivity
  • Organized
  • Clutter-free
  • Hygiene
  • Allergens
  • Creativity
  • Minimalist
  • Professionalism
  • Environmental consciousness
  • Sustainability
  • Calm
  • Time management
  • Aesthetically pleasing
  • Attention to detail
  • Economic
  • Impression
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