At the present time, the population pof some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults ,compared to the number of older people. Do the advantages of the situation outweighs the disadvantages ?
The
population
ratio
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differences
ratio
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while some other people say that Accept space
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this
situation itself is futile. According to my view, the old aged people population
is never decline
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is never declining
has never declined
never declines
.
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This
difference in population
should remain null .
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similarly
, one cannot lead their lives without elders .
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elder people
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The Elder people ratio
Elder people ratio
ratio
should not be dropped ,
since ancient times elders had been teaching traditional values and culture to usAccept space
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Ram and Razvan familyAccept space
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Ram’s family
had imbibed the values of culture and tradition from their grandparents whereas Razvan’s family were modern with lack of Suggestion
The Ram’s family
cultural
and tradition in the familySuggestion
culture
.
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Consequently
, Razvan’s family faces many problems. Secondly
, elder people teaches
many human values and qualities Suggestion
teach
such
as discipline, staunch behaviour, respecting elders and many other
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others
Hence
, old aged people plays
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play
vital role
in Suggestion
a vital role
population
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teaches
us many tactics to lead Suggestion
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life
smartly, Suggestion
a life
the life
such
as preparing home-made products ,
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to
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with
by
grand parents
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grandparents
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family but
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the family, but
the family but
also
they withstand for family and country welfare
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the country's welfare
country's welfare
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family
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country
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the country
hence
population
of old aged people must remain in the good Suggestion
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ratio
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population
ratio
of old aged people leads to disastrous
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country
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