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Increase in tourism is causing English to become a common language.This advantages and disadvantages. Discuss in detail both.

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Owing to the gaining popularity in
tourism industry
Suggestion
the tourism industry
,
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 has become a widespread
language
. It is commonly being used as a means of communication, while
this
 has various advantages
,
Accept space
,
it has quite a few
advanatages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
advantageous
advantage
 too. In
this
 essay, I will highlight a few merits and demerits. In the past, people often faced difficulties in terms of interaction due to
language
 barrier.
This
 was
especiallu
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 seen in multi-lingual countries
such
 as India, where various religions and languages are practiced even to
this
 date. With English being popularised, it has become far more convenient to talk to people around.
For instance
, tourists around the world, can now converse comfortably with the locals to ask for any kind of information about the city. Even though, a common
language
 is being highly encouraged,
however
 a few demerits can not go unnoticed. Due to focussing on one
language
,
Accept space
,
other native languages may go into extinction. Our future generations may never learn or even be aware of their existence.
Furthermore
, since generations,
language
 has been linked to tradition and culture. With the exile of local languages
,
Accept space
,
even the community traditions may get affected. To conclude, as a coin has two sides so does
this
 issue. Before enacting upon the decision of making it a common source, one must ponder upon the pros and cons and take appropriate measures to tackle the negative
angke
the space between two lines or planes that intersect; the inclination of one line to another; measured in degrees or radians
angle
 of the scenario.
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