People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

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People primarily enrol in a college or university to achieve the necessary
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and degree they require to build a
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. Apart from the
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, people seek higher studies to gain knowledge, to enhance
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the social status
and learn more about diverse cultures. The current
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and its educational structures are far different than they had been a century back when a self-educated person could gain a good
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and parents could arrange private tutors to ensure their children’s
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. But in today’s world, universities are the authority to declare a person to have the necessary
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to be ready for the
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. People are going to universities because
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is the most common way of getting the
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. The sole purpose of a college or university is to ensure the proper theoretical and moral
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to build the ideal citizens the country needs and
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is the system which is unquestionably accepted by the
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. People who do not have the plan to use their certificate to get a
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either because they have other
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plans or may be blessed with inherited fortune. Many go to these educational institutes to learn values, gather ideas and
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they require to be good humans. In fact,
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is a borderline between a savage person and a good man and
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is another reason the
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has adopted the idea of
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for all. Some people go to universities to get
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education
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to enhance their horizon or to improve their
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position and salary. Others go to the colleges and universities to let the world know that they are educated. Funny
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may seem but many people simply consider
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higher
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as the status they require to get a higher position in the
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. In conclusion,
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, experiencing diverse cultures and customs, getting prepared for the future
career
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, improving
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position, subject matter interests and social status are the main reasons for people to attend colleges and universities.
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