Modern building change the character and appearance of towns and cities. The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Owing to the erection of new structures, the features of urban areas are transformed. Many demand that the government enforces strict laws saying that recent buildings be designed traditionally to preserve cultural heritage. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with
this
notion and
therefore
believe cities should be modernized. On the one hand, the construction of rural houses in urban areas will obviously constantly leave the prints of our culture in the hearts of people.
For instance
, one will not necessarily need to travel long distances to get in touch with his or her roots.
In addition
, it will be easier to pass
this
on to our children seeing that they live with it daily.
As a result
, our culture which is who we are, will not be lost.
On the other hand
, modern houses should be left to be built in cities and towns. Reason being that if all the buildings in cities and villages are the same, what
then
will attract foreign investors?
Moreover
, revenue is generated through
tourist's
Suggestion
tourists'
tourist
visits to modernized towns.
For example
, it is a known fact that the entrance fair into the National Museum in London is used to promote free education in public schools.
As a result
, the weight is less
for
Suggestion
from
the government. In conclusion,
although
erecting rural houses in towns
is
Suggestion
are
a sure way to safeguard our heritage, it is of Paramount importance that income acquired by the government from foreign investors is not cut short.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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