Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Athlete, people who compete in sports, earn more than people in significant occupations. Is

this

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wrong or right?. Many say it is wrong, others say

otherwise

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. Even though

sports men

someone who engages in sports

sportsmen

and women should not be paid higher than other professionals in their field since they require their services to perform effectively, they are most times rewarded from the proceeds of bets placed on them. Thereby, I am of the opinion that it is justified. Of a truth, we need one another to survive and

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, there should be no reason why one should earn more than the other. Every professional

partners

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partner

with other professionals to be successful, athletes inclusive. To illustrate, a footballer acquires the services of a medical practitioner,

that is

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, in all fields of medicine, to see that he or she is in sound health; and

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a legal practitioner, a financial adviser to mention a few, all work closely with the player to ensure a blooming career.

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none

Suggestion

no-one

should be

under paid

pay too little

underpaid

. Notwithstanding, the fact that sports professionals earn more should not be a problem to anyone, because in most cases, they are paid with the money gotten from bets on them.

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, in China the winner of the Federal Martial Arts Tournament

makes

mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'

does

away with the money realised from bets and sponsors, no matter how much. They do

this

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to encourage their young men that hard work pays. How

then

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will you say that

this

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is not justified?.

Additionally

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, these

athlete

Suggestion

athletes

represent their countries well and should be immensely appreciated. In conclusion, many believe there is a form of injustice when sports professionals earn more than other important professionals, arguing that they all work hand in hand to promote each other. Albeit, I believe it is justified seeing that they are often paid from bets placed on them.

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Topic Vocabulary:

financial remuneration
exceptional
merit
talent
demand
entertainment value
career span
physical demands
justified
unfair
criticism
income inequality
societal priorities
sportsmanship

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