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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to latest fashion. Why is this happening ? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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It has become a global trend to dress and style hair in line with fashions in vogue, in my view
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 has added more advantages than disadvantages. Advancement of the
fashion
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 world has accorded lots of merits
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 as job opportunities, independence, versatility, creativity and a
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 more. A
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 of careers are
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birthed
 by the recent
fashion
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 Development, developing countries now have citizens specialising in various
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aspects
 of clothing line unique to individuals thereby creating job opportunities and expanding the scope of entrepreneurs.
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 recent international development has
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 increased the relationship between countries globally,
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instance China
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instance, China
 is known for mass production of several
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 apparel while United States have a
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 of
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 conscious individuals,
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 has facilitated a
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 of importation between several countries thereby Increasing business opportunities either electronically or physically. In conclusion, everybody wants to feel and look good, no one wants to be seen as not matching up to date despite their ages, races and colours thereby creating more financial gain in business to the
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