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In some developed countries, young people are encouragedto work or travel for a year at the end of high school and before starting university. What are the pros andcons for people who choose to do this.

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In some developed countries, life experiences are given priority to along with academics for the youngsters. In few metropolitan cities or areas, the youth is propelled to take a
gap
year
. In
this
 essay, the advantages and disadvantages of opting for a
gap
year
 will be discussed.
Firstly
, the young ones can learn important lessons if they choose to take a
gap
year
. The youngsters who work for a
year
 will learn the value of money earned through hard work and
therefore
 thinks before squandering their money. The one who might opt travelling will have a
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
 experience of understanding and learning about a plethora of cultures and their
histories but
Accept comma addition
histories, but
moreover
 they will learn to deal with various problems that
otherwise
, would not have faced, if not for their choice of taking taking a
gap
yearn
a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days
year
.
On the other hand
, taking
this
desicion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
 might lead to losing their interest to pursue their
further
 studies. The ones who might have decided to travel during
this
priod
an amount of time
period
 of time might not want to return back to studying and working hard to get a stable job and being financially stable too.
Subsequently
, they might
also
 get depressed or get discouraged due to going out in the real world, as they would either witness or encounter detrimental situations and them being young, they might not know how to handle them. Folks who opt for working, would face the similar issues. In conclusion, the youth is induced to take a
gap
yer
a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days
year
yet
years
 in some developed nations. Though there are chances of them getting
demotivated
 to carry on with their
further
 studies, they might
also
 learn many life lessons.
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