Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people can learn some courses which are now being offered by universities through online education system. In my opinion,
this
is a positive trend which can lead to advantages
such
as
conveniecne
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
and giving a chance to people for learning something new. One advantage fact that can provide the learners a
convenience
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convenient
way for their study. By that it means, they can study their prefer courses at anytime and anywhere as long as they can access the internet.
For instance
, some people need to learn an additional requirement while they are working. At
this
time, many official online courses offered by well recognized and good reputation universities or institutions are very useful for them so that they can learn when they have time after working. Another positive thing is that learning through
internet
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the internet
gives an
oppotunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
for
further
study. People who have already graduated in some speciality sometimes want to learn another skill or knowledge. And
then
, the online educational programs bring a chance for them. In my countries, some professionals
such
as medical doctors to learn some courses like Geographic Information
System which
Accept comma addition
System, which
is a new application for public health management.
Such
a kind of subject
are
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is
very easy to learn from online according to its nature. As a
consequences
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consequence
, it makes them to
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
another skill in their professionals. In conclusion,
although
it has some minor drawbacks concerned with fake programs, it has brought positive impact o
n tod
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today's
todays
ay global education system and it is considered to be very helpful for people who want to upgrade or their knowledge an
d ski
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skills
ll as long as they choose the right courses o
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