Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Dietary sanitation and good
health
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are amongst the major issues of
modern era
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the modern era
. Some people think that, as an individual it is
our
plural of "I"
we
ought most responsibility to improve our dietary conditions and
health
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.
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, some consider it
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government's
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the government's
job to provide quality
food
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for its people. I believe,
role
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the role
of
government
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and awareness
in
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on
population both
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population, both
are
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is
pivotal in
this
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situation.
To begin
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with,
health
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issues related to
food
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and the means of tackling them is an important part of
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government's job
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the government's job
.
Firstly
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,
food
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inspection authorities should be established in every city, with complete authority to investigate any
food
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chain or mart.
Such
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steps would upgrade
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food quality
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the food quality
served at local hotels.
Secondly
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, fast
food
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chains are spreading at an alarming rate both internationally and on local ground. Imposing high taxation on these brands would lower down their progression. Eventually, with limited options of fast
food
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in town, its consumption will decrease.
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, reducing progression of obesity.
In addition
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to that, developing awareness in
general population
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the general population
through media could be one of the most fruitful step.
For instance
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, pork is highly consumed in
west
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the west
. Thereby, informing
general population
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the general population
regarding the gastrointestinal conditions triggered by eating pork could incline people towards less harmful
food
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,
for example
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, chicken or fish.
On the other hand
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, personal efforts are
also
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fundamental in improving
health
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. While, dinning
out one
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out, one
should visit locations authorized and clarified by
government
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to reduce to chances
food
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poisoning.
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, People should do regular exercise to ensure positive
health
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changes.
Workup
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Work-up
would emulsify fat, improve physical fitness.
Subsequently
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eliminating
health
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factors related to obesity.
Moreover
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, the most important factor is consumption of
balanced diet
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a balanced diet
. To make sure every component of
food
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is included in dietary routine. To conclude, graph of
food
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hygiene and physical
health
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is low in most part of the world. I believe,
this
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situation could improve provided governments reconsider their schemes to approach it. And individuals perform their duties to eliminate the causative factors. As both have
equal part
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an equal part
to play in
this
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issue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health-conscious decisions
  • self-discipline
  • informed choices
  • personal accountability
  • regulating food industries
  • implementing policies
  • healthy eating
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies for healthy food
  • enabling environment
  • accessible
  • affordable
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