Some people believe that museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18 years of age. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Historic
buildings depicts
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buildings, depicts
the culture and tradition of a nation.
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Therefore some
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Therefore, some
people opine that there should not be any fee to visit public buildings like Taj
mahal
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Mahal
memorials and many more
atleast
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at least
for non adults. As authorities should
intoduce
cause to come to know personally
introduce
our historical background to their upcoming generations. I strongly agree with
this
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notion. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will elucidate my viewpoint with more relevant examples. To commence with, allowing children to
eplore
inquire into
explore
historical sites without any charge trigger the crowd of young generation to visit
such
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places.
For instance
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, it has been observed that free things always excite the
oosprings
the season of growth
springs
to have a look and enjoy it once. In
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process, they will come to know about their
country;s
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country's
countries
heritage and they will not be in any dilemma as it will not hurt their pockets,
in contrast
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to, the situation if they have to pay for it.
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, for short picnics and trips they might
pefer
like better; value more highly
prefer
to go to these places with their friends and families.
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, visiting
such
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spots fosters their interest in the subject of
histiry
the aggregate of past events
history
and aid them to perform extraordinarily in their academics at school level.
For example
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, it is rightly said 'a picture is a worthy than a thousand words. Exploring
such
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places help them to remember the incident and the person behind it more easily than reading textbooks.
In addition
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to
this
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, free visits for children encourage educational institutions to arrange
such
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tours for students more frequently. In the nutshell. I would like to pen down by saying that keeping free visits for non adults to places like museums and historic sites is a great way to promote
significance
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the significance
of history among the new generation.
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