Nowadays genetically modified food is widespread all over the world. While proponents of GM crops ensure that these foods are safe for human consumption and help to increase food supplies, others argue that their effects on health have not been studied long enough. Describe pros and cons of genetically modified foods.

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Genetically modified item's availability is increasing day by day, across the globe. Some take the side and other oppose it. We will discuss few points on both sides, below. Coming to the advantages, It is really needed,
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the present situation, to meet the demand of food. GM, not only provides the solution for the
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a need
to go for the above solution. Not only the mentioned problem can be resolved, but some of the bi-products created, provide's healthy and safety meal for us. Crops that are grown with
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, can sustain in odd condition's and can
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the human race
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, it may create new problem's, which are unknown as of now. In conclusion, As every research has its own pros and cons, we should be careful before using them and should have thorough check for ample of time, before released to market or make available for consumption.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • genetically modified (GM)
  • crop efficiency
  • nutritional content
  • environmental benefits
  • economic advantages
  • health effects
  • biodiversity
  • ethical issues
  • agribusiness
  • pest-resistant
  • herbicide-tolerant
  • yield
  • biotechnology
  • sustainability
  • food security
  • vitamin-fortified
  • cross-breeding
  • patent
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