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Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

#people #lessons #parent #school #curriculum #students
One can understand
importance
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the importance
 of things only when it’s needed. But something is better than nothing phrase can only explain view of some people who thinks
lessons
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the lessons
 of good parenting should be taught in
school
. As per my understanding parenting lessons does not hold much
importance
 to
school
 goers. In
next paragraphs
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the next paragraphs
 I will try
consolidate
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to consolidate
 my view about
topic
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a topic
the topic
 and view of teaching good parenting in
school
. It’s of great
importance
 that one must learn about parenting. Even though generally people don’t go
for
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to
 parenting classes when it’s required. Over and above reading habits of people are
also
 on down side, which means mostly people don’t even read about good parenting. So, in
such
 a
times
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time
, thinking of some people about imparting knowledge of
such
 an important
subject
 in schools can’t be wrong, at least
seed
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the seed
 is sown.
School
 goers may not be interested in
such
 a
subject
. They can’t appreciate
importance
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the importance
 of
subject
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a subject
subjects
the subject
 because they
does not need
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do not need
this
 information at
this
 stage of life.
For
example many
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example, many
 subjects are
complimented
make complete or perfect; supply what is wanting or form the complement to
complemented
 with practical experience in schools, like doing
science experiment
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science experiments
a science experiment
 in
laboratory
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the laboratory
a laboratory
. Where they can apply learned knowledge and appreciate the
subject
. But
schools
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school
 goers can’t do parenting practical’s,
however parents
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however, parents
 attending good parenting classes can do apply learned knowledge from class and can understand and experience the
importance
 of
this
subject
. In
nutshell it
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a nutshell, it
a nutshell it
 is not a wrong idea to introduce
this
subject
 in
school
, but teaching a complete
subject
 about
this
 topic is not of much
importance
 to students in schools.
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