Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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the lessons
of good parenting should be taught in
school
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and view of teaching good parenting in
school
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importance
that one must learn about parenting. Even though generally people don’t go
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to
parenting classes when it’s required. Over and above reading habits of people are
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on down side, which means mostly people don’t even read about good parenting. So, in
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, thinking of some people about imparting knowledge of
such
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the seed
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goers may not be interested in
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a
subject
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the importance
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a subject
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do not need
this
information at
this
stage of life.
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with practical experience in schools, like doing
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however, parents
attending good parenting classes can do apply learned knowledge from class and can understand and experience the
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a nutshell, it
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is not a wrong idea to introduce
this
subject
in
school
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subject
about
this
topic is not of much
importance
to students in schools.
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