An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for individual and companies to shopping online?

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different way
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different ways
a different way
.
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one
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One
of the rising sector in which affect dynamic changes in our
society
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and economic system-most commonly in the sector of IT (information technology) it's
enchance
increased or intensified in value or beauty or quality
enhanced
innocence
the
capabality
the quality of being capable -- physically or intellectually or legally
capability
to buy a
product
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without moving at home.
online
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Online
shopping is started grip in the
market
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and people make it mind to get
easy
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easier
. In Pakistan mostly woman, children and
people especially
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people, especially
they don'
t
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travel
easly
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
in
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market
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the market
due to some
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a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
reasons
recent
(old age,
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).
actually it's
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depend on the
city
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and
area
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the area
in which you
living
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live
are living
, especially
product
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mattter
a vaguely specified concern
matter
matters
mattered
alot
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a lot
. In
karachi
the largest city in Pakistan; located in southeastern Pakistan; an industrial center and seaport on the Arabian Sea; former capital of Pakistan
Karachi
almost-area is full of shops, local
shop
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,
days
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day
bazar
a shop where a variety of goods are sold
bazaar
(
friday
the sixth day of the week; the fifth working day
Friday
,
sunday
first day of the week; observed as a day of rest and worship by most Christians
Sunday
)
,
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,
people carry
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product
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a product
on hand to sell
in
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at
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market
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the market
, on of the innovation is that many super-marts and malls
also
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facalitate
make easier
facilitate
facilitates
all in
one
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product
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.
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, it's real the reason of online shopping is
base
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based
on need? I can give you the reason of online shopping, what it does
impact
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in our
society
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. The nature of Customer
is depend
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depends
on cheapest
product
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and
requied
necessary for relief or supply
required
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heigh
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
quality.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, why they
purchase
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goods in online
platfoam
a raised horizontal surface
platforms
.
Actually when
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Actually, when
you go to buy
product
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so,
mostly
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most
poeple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
is
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are
in working class. It can manage salary
hole
all of something including all its component elements or parts
whole
month. It could be making
budget
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a budget
for purchasing.
when
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When
consumer
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a consumer
the consumer
see
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sees
the
product
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they want to
purchase
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with
paraticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
budget, attract the display or packing so, it can motivate for purchasing.
In
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At
During
this
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time
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mostly
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most
people use
internet
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the internet
or social media. In internet, users see the
add
a public promotion of some product or service
ad
in
suveral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
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time
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times
with
compitative
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
rate, best presentation and picture is
heighly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
highly
resolution
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resolving
, eye-
cheack
examine so as to determine accuracy, quality, or condition
check
cheek
.
when
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When
costomer
someone who pays for goods or services
customer
customers
inspireor
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inspires or
inspire or
dig out these
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product
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products
in different platform of internet. It's
want
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wanting
to
requied
anything (such as a document or a phonograph record or a photograph) providing permanent evidence of or information about past events
record
cheapest rate, including the
facality
one of the inherent cognitive or perceptual powers of the mind
faculty
facility
of home
dilivery
the act of delivering or distributing something (as goods or mail)
delivery
so, what you want it's all are like heaven
except
consider or hold as true
accept
you paid a
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heigh
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
higher
ammount
a quantity of money
amount
amounts
of
money
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for taken services. It's a
benifical
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benefit
beneficial
for
this
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person
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which have
money
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to
spend but
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spend, but
not have
time
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for going
market
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,
barganing
the negotiation of the terms of a transaction or agreement
bargaining
and facing lot of traffic and
also
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old age peson
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the old age person
old age person
old age people
an old age person
or living distance in
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market
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the market
, it can help people for surviving easy and happy without any social issue of
faimly
a social unit living together
family
.
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Company
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The company
have
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has
has had
ever advantages
for
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of
to
in
saling
the exchange of goods for an agreed sum of money
selling
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product but
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a product, but
a product but
in
this
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senario
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
,
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company
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the company
a company
have
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has
a multiple roots for
saling
the exchange of goods for an agreed sum of money
selling
product
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especially in
online
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the online market
market
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.
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company
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The company
Company
have
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has
vast audioance
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a vast audience
vast audience
vast audiences
to develop an
awerness
having knowledge of
awareness
in particular
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product
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on the customize marketing
softwwre it
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software, it
software it
can
differenciate
mark as different
differentiate
differentiated
by gender, age, location,
city
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state
.
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.
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one
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One
of the
advantage
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advantages
is that
company
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have cost cutting for
dipalying
to show, make visible or apparent
displaying
product
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in
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shop
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the shop
a shop
, electricity bills,
mantance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
mountains
and
also
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less human resources.
only
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Only
company
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maintain
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maintains
quality of
product
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and using presentation skill for the
seek
Japanese alcoholic beverage made from fermented rice; usually served hot
sake
of satisfaction of
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person
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the person
.
when
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When
we see
whole picture
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the whole picture
(
frount
the side that is forward or prominent
front
, back)
then
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you realize what is that, it
mean
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means
everything in
this
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world have
essience
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an essence
essence
assurance
absence
of bad-good so, there is some negative thing
for
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about
shopping online and positive
prospectice
the possibility of future success
prospects
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
was
discuss
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discussing
.
we
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We
live in the
society
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, online shopping
is directly intract
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directly interacts
is directly interact
is directly interacts
is directly interacted
with the technology less human resources should use, consumer
know
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knows
the website and it's depend on that no
person
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is
valueable
having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
available
for
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to
this
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business,
company
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give
services
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service's
behalf of
money
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. There is no felling between buyer and
saller
someone who promotes or exchanges goods or services for money
seller
sellers
both are
intract
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interact
interacting
intact
entrusted
with
interst
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
.
we
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We
see the same method in our relation,
faimly
a social unit living together
family
, social
intraction
a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interaction
and
also
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friend
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a friend
. Technology
impact
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slowly in our mind and it
could be mamoplate
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could manipulate
could be manipulate
our
decsion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
direction
diction
, reality and
felling
decreasing in amount or degree
falling
beside that if you
purchase
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goods for
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shop keeper
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shop keepers
the shop keeper
in your area, it must pay
attenction
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attention
, eye
conatct
close interaction
contact
, Salam and try to
built
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build
some ethical terms for better understanding,
it's
the thing named or in question
it
can
swoup
exchange or give (something) in exchange for
swap
swop
swipe
your mood.
it's
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It's
realize
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realizing
to fell another
person
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felling and suppose that
one
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day you don'
t
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have
sufficiant
of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant
sufficient
money
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to
purchase
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product
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a product
the product
, it's
necassory
absolutely essential
necessary
to buy so, what option do you have. If you
purchase
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retaler they
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retailers, they
retailers they
should
coprate
work together on a common enterprise of project
cooperate
co-operate
you to give good for
person
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intraction but
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interaction, but
interaction but
in traction but
onling
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
on-line
market
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can'
t
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doing
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do
that is
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policy
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the policy
is
first
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to pay
then
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open the parcel bag. There is
huge number
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a huge number
of people live in
maga
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a major city
major city
major cities
city
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. All of that want's to work near the
home-town
the town (or city) where you grew up or where you have your principal residence
hometown
or
city
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, it will take a startup for
openng
first or beginning
opening
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shop
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a shop
of
ratailer
a merchant who sells goods at retail
retailers
retailer
, it's run for the
time
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being.
online
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Online
shopping is
one
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person
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who
get
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gets
money
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for whole
product
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and they
elemanate
terminate, end, or take out
eliminate
shop
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keeper, local
market
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.
it's
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Its
It's
impacat
the striking of one body against another
impact
in
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on
our
society
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is
one
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person
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is
richest
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rich
and
one
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is
poorest
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poor
, when the
person
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have less
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money it's
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money, it's
generating
socail
relating to human society and its members
social
scale
problem,
faimly
a social unit living together
family
problem and it's creating unbalance
society
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.
online
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The online market strategy
online market strategy
Online market strategy
Online market stratgy
market
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stratgy is to
ingaged
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engage
engaged
woman
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women
a woman
and
also
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the
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heigh
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
higher
rate of online customer is
woman
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a woman
so, it's creating
heigh
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amount in home budget or
desir
the feeling that accompanies an unsatisfied state
desire
desert
desired
and it's
also
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reason of
faimly
a social unit living together
family
dispute
cilently
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silent
silently
silenced
. There in no predictable disadvantage of online shopping
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company but
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company, but
it have
summarise
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summarised
this
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article in a few
word
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words
or some tool for
manage
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managing
your for healthy
envoiroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
kindly
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Kindly
thinking about in changes who
impact
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in
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on
our life,
prefair
like better; value more highly
prefer
social
intraction
a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interaction
interactions
instruction
for buying and
also
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for spending
time
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in human, not at all at mobile-phone or different
technolegical
based in scientific and industrial progress
technological
equipment.
try
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Try
to understand the
felling
the experiencing of affective and emotional states
feeling
of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
by talking issues of other
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
beaches
it's your solution and get
do
engage in
make
for better for that
person
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, if you have
athority
the power or right to give orders or make decisions
authority
to overcome. Ever
prefair
like better; value more highly
prefer
the
hand-work
a work produced by hand labor
handwork
person
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to
purchase
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good or service or ever
faver
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Faver
further
for nearest
person
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which doing well at that job. If you imagine that, you will realize IT (Information Technology) is
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impact
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an impact
impacting
on your mind and if you want to see the example, meet that
person
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they can'
t
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use IT more is quite different from you.
every thing
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Everything
Every thing
in not
an
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a
logic
some thing
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
is
abstruct
consider a concept without thinking of a specific example; consider abstractly or theoretically
abstract
in
this
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world.
switch
change over, change around, as to a new order or sequence
Switch
off cell phone several
day
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days
you will realize. Thanks you for reading, Hopes so you will learn and
also
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am quite better for sharing.
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