Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

Education

has

most important impacr

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the most important impact

most important impact

in our lives. We get our

education

when we are small. Some people argue that infants

shouls

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

shows

start their schooling since they are small, but others disagree with that. In my view, I would like to support that young

adolscence

a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity

adolescents

should spend their

time

on playing because of

few reasons

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a few reasons

. The

first

reason is that they are not responsible enough to get their knowledge. In order to go to school or study, you should be mature enough and dependable to get your

education

very

efficiently

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efficient

. So, if

children's mind

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the children's mind

still thinking about playing and about many other thinks rather than studying, they

can not

can not

cannot

benefit from their

leasier

time available for ease and relaxation

leisure

time

.

For example

, I have

small daughter

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a small daughter

at

age

4 years. She

spend

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spends

has spent

her

time

playing with her barbie and watching television. Once day, I decided to

enroll

register formally as a participant or member

enrol

her in the preschool. Sadly, she spent the whole month crying because she could not understand anything. Her mind is confused and cannot write her homework because she depends on me to finish it for her.

Consequently

, I decided to take her off from the school. Luckily, I realized that it is too early to put her in the heavy educational system and she

wont

will not

won't

be happy with that. I know every

time

has its

age

to

enroll

register formally as a participant or member

enrol

in it. AS you can see, my daughter

has not had been relax

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is not relaxing

isn't relaxing

doesn't relax

does not relax

has not relaxed

hasn't relaxed

was not relaxing

and enjoy her

age

if I put her in a system that she could not understand it. The

second

important reasons

is

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are

that early learning will reduce their productivity when they grow up. When we let our children to

enroll

register formally as a participant or member

enrol

in the

education

field in early

age

, they have to wake up early and finish their work on

time

and they

wont

will not

won't

have

time

to play. Sadly, when they become older all the work became not enjoyable even if they have a deep experience. . So, it will fasten the consumption of their power.

For instance

, once day my father told me his story about how his family

let

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lets

him

to get

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get

his

education

at

age

4b years. Surprisingly, my father got his master degree in

after

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over

20. He became professional in every

things

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thing

and many people

was

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were

proud of him. Unfortunately, my father did not have the

time

to play or to enjoy their

time

like other children. When he became 50 years old, he tired and he had not anything to give because all his thoughts was consumed.

This

experience taught me that I

wont

will not

won't

want

let my children to

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let my children

lose their childhood with studying. In sum,

education

is essential to

everyone but

Accept comma addition

everyone, but

it has its

age

. Children should spend most of their

time

playing because they are nor dependable and they will lose their power early. So

,

Accept space

,

all of us should support let children

to play

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play

most of the

time

.