Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

This
essay is about the social services, without any financial support to high schools and teenagers. Some peoples believe it should be
compulsory part
Suggestion
a compulsory part
in schools for all students. Especially working for the charity organizations, to help poor people and
sport
the activity of providing for or maintaining by supplying with money or necessities
support
them in their lives. These kind of social activities are quite important for the children's, who are young and energetic. I am a strong advocate of
this
approach for the high school programmers.
Hence
, it’s
also
depends on the school culture, and their preferences in teaching skills.
Such
as, if
there
of them or themselves
their
primary goal is just to teach them a technical
stuff
personnel who assist their superior in carrying out an assigned task
staff
only,
then
that wouldn't make out youth interest to help the unstable families and peoples around us.
Moreover
,
this
practice shouldn't be limited to educations institutes only, we could even help out
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
and family members. Despite fro the charity organization, the direct help to the acquaintances will be
also
valuable.
For example
, the student in the same class, who deserve a financial support is more deserving person than others, and he/she can immediately get benefit from our help.
Furthermore
, In the study campuses, students are keenly interested to
lean
gain knowledge or skills
learn
, not only education as well as, ethics and humanity.
Additionally
, by just pushing them little bit can make
huge change
Suggestion
huge changes
a huge change
in our future generation to always mercy on deserving person. Particularly, I guess, they could even take responsibility of
family
Suggestion
the family
a family
or an old
widows
Suggestion
widow
womens
Suggestion
woman
women
, who cannot survive in the expensive with without and financial support until she gets some better opportunity to manage her life expenses in
better way
Suggestion
a better way
. To conclude, in my point of view, helping others is more important than, sports in the institutes, the younger people will learn the humanity, and they will become a decent and wise person in society and useful assets of the country.
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