Some people believe they should keep all d money d have earned and should not pay tax to the government. Do you agree or disagree?

How will the
government
function? When old age
finally
sets in who
ll
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LL
take care of the medical bills of the old?
Finally how
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Finally, how
ll
Suggestion
LL
oil
all
development
take
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takes
its course in the society if taxes are not paid?
This
essay seeks to answer these questions. Taxes are
money
paid by individuals to ensure proper functioning of the society. Through taxes,
government
generates funds to provide basic social amenities which are essential for standard living.
For instance
, in the educational sector, most families find it very difficult to afford private schools for their
children but
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children, but
public schools which are funded by the
government
through taxes
,
Accept space
,
promotes free education and free feeding scheme for these children.
Therefore
,
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,
with
this
the
government
serves the people better and in turn the people are
also
served better.
Furthermore
, proper medical and
healthcare
Suggestion
health care
is ensured during old age as the
government
through taxes paid during
they
of them or themselves
their
working years by these people are later used to take care of them during old age by subsidizing the bills or even giving free medicals.
Also
so many families may decide to take their older family members to
old peoples home which
Suggestion
the old peoples home, which
the old peoples home which
are mostly owned by the
government
.
Finally
, taxes if properly used can
futher
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
bring
futher
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
feather
development in the tourism sector as tourist attraction sites can be built and
money
realized to improve the economy of the society.
On the other hand
, if individuals resolve to
keeping
Suggestion
keep
money
in the bank without paying taxes all
these
plural of that
those
listed above and more cannot be achieved. In most places, the
government
does a tax return at the end of the year and
money
is given back to individuals to encourage
tax payers
someone who pays taxes
taxpayers
. In conclusion, individuals should endeavour to pay taxes as it ensures cooperation with the
government
to provide needful amenities which individuals nor private firms cannot provide solely to improve the quality of life.
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  • government revenue
  • public services
  • economic stability
  • inequality
  • civic responsibility
  • productivity
  • entrepreneurship
  • tax evasion
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