Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a difference of opinion on how unpleasant situations should be handled. While a number of individuals argue that accepting a negative circumstance is better, I am of the viewpoint that trying to change

such

circumstance is more beneficial than accepting the situation. Those who support the view that bad incidences should be accepted argue on the basis of religious belief.

This

is because they claim that

majority

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the majority

of

such

happens

as a result

of the influence of a higher being. They argue that

such

states should be accepted as

this

prepares us for better events. A man who believes in a supreme being and recently lost his

job

,

for instance

, would rather than search for a

job

claim everything happens for a

reason because

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reason, because

he believes a higher power would eventually provide a

job

when the time is right.

However

, I would argue that some events

such

as lack of finance, unsatisfactory

job

, or toxic relationships should be improved for one’s mental state.

This

implies that an unpleasant event of

situation

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a situation

the situation

happening in one’s life has serious implications on their mental health leading to increase

rate

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the rate

of

depression

and psychosis. Take

for example

, a research carried out by the World Health Organization, in 2018 revealed that about 75% of patients with

depression

had some sort

of negative event

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of a negative event

happening in their lives at the time they experienced

depression

.

However

,

this

figure was said to have reduced significantly immediately after

such

situations were changed.

Hence

, if most situations are tackled

with determination

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with this determination

this

would lead to the decrease rate of

depression

, which in turn leads to decrease in

sucidal

the act of killing yourself

suicide

rates. In conclusion, while a lot of people tend to argue that unpleasant states should be accepted as

this

is from a higher source, I believe that most negative circumstances should be changed as

this

improves mental health and decreases

sucidal

the act of killing yourself

suicide

suicidal

rates within the community.