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The performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity?

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Employee’s
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The employee’s performance
performance
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 has a major effect on the success of an organization. Companies can raise their worker’s outcomes by
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 their punctuality and involving them in motivational speeches by the top management. To increase staff productivity, companies have to make sure they have punctual workers. If employees are consistent
in
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with
 certain aspects of their daily working hours in the workforce environment
such
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 as office coming time and not going back home before off-time, as well as attending meetings on
regular basis
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a regular basis
, it will eventually enhance their
performance
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 and output in their
company
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.
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, a recent survey by the London School of Business concluded a study that employees who are consistent in their daily working duration activities are more beneficial than those who are not. Another way of boosting the
performance
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 level of employees is to motivate them through speeches by the senior management officers in the
company
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 at least once a month. Motivation is a key to
enhance
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enhancing
 the will of a worker up to a high level. If an employee who is not
encourages
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encouraged
 to do a certain task at hand, he or she will not perform well, despite his or her capability to do a certain work.
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, research indicated that Google has achieved 98% success in their employees output and
performance
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, owing to the motivational speeches by its senior management staff to the rest of the employees. In conclusion, the rise and development of a
company
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highly depends
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highly depend
 on the
performance
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 of their employees. Checking the punctuality of
staff
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the staff
 by the
company
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 and motivating them for certain tasks
are
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is
 two critical ways of rising employee’s better output
level
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levels
.
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