Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too valuable or too important to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, research regarding business, the academic
world
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and
sciences
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the sciences
are being conducted to an extensive extent. There are some people who opine that it would be beneficial to share
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information
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as much as possible while others have the view that some of the
information
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is too crucial to be shared. In
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essay, both of the mentioned views will be discussed. Giving out
information
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regarding the mentioned fields would lead to the betterment of the
world
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. If it is not being shared,
then
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the entire purpose of the researches would not be fulfilled and no matter how important and valuable the data is, it would essentially be redundant, as it would be of no use. Sharing of the pivotal
information
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would lead to
further
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developments. To illustrate, if Isaac Newton had kept the
information
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regarding the principles of
gravity
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gravity, then
then
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there would not be any
further
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researches in
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and the related fields; there would not have been the inventions of spacecraft and we would not know how the solar system or the universe would work.
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, it is extremely vital for the
information
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to be shared in order to make the
world
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a better place.
On the contrary
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, sharing every little detail of the researches conducted might be the downfall of the human race. If they fall into the wrong hands or
someome
a human being
someone
with the intentions to harm others, it might be extremely detrimental
for
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to
the society if they are capable of using the
information
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in the right way.
For instance
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, the invention of atomic bombs has lead to the deaths of millions of innocent people.
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invention could have been possible only if the inventor had an idea on how atoms work and he would not have known that unless the
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regarding
this
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was shared.
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, it is true that it is perilous to give out all the
information
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collected through the researches. In conclusion, if the
information
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is
shared it
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shared, it
can be used in the development and progression of the
world
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,
however
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it could
also
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be deleterious to do so. In my view, it is worth it to share the
information
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due to the mentioned reasons.
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, if a person has an intent to harm
others
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others, then
then
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they would find a way to do it and
finally
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, the pros sharing of
information
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outwighs
be heavier than
outweighs
outweigh
the cons.
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