These days, children tend to spend a great deal of time playing computer games. Some believe this is a beneficial trend while others think it is detrimental. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many children spend a considerable amount of their

time

by playing

computer

games. While most of the people, especially parents, think that

this

is a waste of valuable

time

and

this

time

should be utilised for

learning academic

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learning, academic

lessons or taking part in outdoor activities, very few think playing

computer

games

is

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are

helpful for children’s cognitive development. I firmly believe that children should play

computer

games particularly

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games, particularly

brain games and strategy

games but

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games, but

a balance should be maintained so that it does not become an addiction. In the highly developed technological modern world, it is important for children to play

computer

games.

Firstly

, by doing

this

they can learn how to use computers and become familiar with new technology.

Moreover

, children communicate

to

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with

each other at school during the break and often discuss different strategies of some particular

computer

game. Not only they develop their skills and

knowledge

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knowledge, such

such

as 3D vision, imagination, and fantasy by playing those, but

also

computer

game is the new modern way of leisure activity for young people, which help them develop thinking patterns, have friends online and build an online world. Many

computer

games are great learning resources and

therefore

parents and teacher should supervise what type of games a child play and how much

time

they spend on that.

On the other hand

, spending too much

time

on

computer

games might be dangerous for children.

For example

, some children may not do their homework because they become addicted to

computer

games and play those most of the

time

.

Also

, children have less face-to-face communication with their friends and families as they are busy with games.

Furthermore

, some of youngest might even become aggressive as

computer

games expose them to violence and fighting.

Therefore

, the assistance from adults is needed to help children to keep a balance between

computer

games and other compulsory deals. Spending too much

time

can be detrimental to the children’s health, especially for their eyes. To conclude, a balance is required to ensure children are not playing

computer

games too much and spending a lot of

time

in front of computers may lead to disadvantages in other

arrears

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

areas

of life

such

as social communications.

However

, playing

computer

games for learning and exploring new ideas can be a very effective way to enhance knowledge and imagination

for

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in

children.