These days, children tend to spend a great deal of time playing computer games. Some believe this is a beneficial trend while others think it is detrimental. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many children spend a considerable amount of their

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by playing

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games. While most of the people, especially parents, think that

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is a waste of valuable

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and

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should be utilised for

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learning, academic

lessons or taking part in outdoor activities, very few think playing

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games

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helpful for children’s cognitive development. I firmly believe that children should play

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games particularly

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games, particularly

brain games and strategy

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games, but

a balance should be maintained so that it does not become an addiction. In the highly developed technological modern world, it is important for children to play

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games.

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, by doing

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they can learn how to use computers and become familiar with new technology.

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, children communicate

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each other at school during the break and often discuss different strategies of some particular

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game. Not only they develop their skills and

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knowledge, such

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as 3D vision, imagination, and fantasy by playing those, but

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game is the new modern way of leisure activity for young people, which help them develop thinking patterns, have friends online and build an online world. Many

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games are great learning resources and

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parents and teacher should supervise what type of games a child play and how much

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they spend on that.

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, spending too much

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on

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games might be dangerous for children.

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, some children may not do their homework because they become addicted to

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games and play those most of the

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, children have less face-to-face communication with their friends and families as they are busy with games.

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, some of youngest might even become aggressive as

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games expose them to violence and fighting.

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, the assistance from adults is needed to help children to keep a balance between

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games and other compulsory deals. Spending too much

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can be detrimental to the children’s health, especially for their eyes. To conclude, a balance is required to ensure children are not playing

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games too much and spending a lot of

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in front of computers may lead to disadvantages in other

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as social communications.

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, playing

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games for learning and exploring new ideas can be a very effective way to enhance knowledge and imagination

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children.